Shawn L. Bird

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vigil December 11, 2011

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:12 am
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We’re waiting

counting the space between breaths

that stretch the silence

before the next crackling,

static filled gasp

of a soul tuning toward



4 Responses to “vigil”

  1. waiting on life to pass by or death at the door, haunting, sad piece! 😦
    enjoy gooseberry day!

  2. This is power-packed. You’ve said a lot in few words. That’s good writing.

  3. Morning Says:

    dynamic word flow, love it.

  4. Pat Eurich Says:

    Powerful words …

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