Sighs floating on the
Whispers of wishes and dreams,
our future unfolds
Night after night
in kisses and caresses.
With whispered words in the darkness,
we’re wrapped in rapture
year after year.
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This poem is part of Jingle’s Poetry Rally Week 32
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/
Shawn L. Bird 
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the love maybe old, but the passion I think remains same year after year! 🙂 nice one!
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No- not the same. Like a fine wine, it improves with age. 25 years and counting…
An enchanting piece. Well done.
Wow…lovely poem…
goes so well with the title…
beautiful words… 🙂
old love,
wow,
beautiful portrayal of it.
Happy Rally,
Happy Saturday.
Thanks for the support.
lovely poem. made me think of my mom and dad who were married for fifty odd years…
New love is fine but as you say old love is fine like wine gets better with time. Nice post and thanks for dropping by
loved it.
A tribute to perfect love
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/soaring/
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here is mine:
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html
I am dreaming already
* sigh *
Love xox
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absolutely stunning! I love this poem!
Such a lovely little poem! It really does capture the beauty of love 🙂 Well done!
The way we all wish it to be – to me your poem is hope. Love it.
Such a beautiful poem, very well written. Loved it 🙂
All the best
Marinela x
What a delight to read. How much you say in so few lines.
Short, but so very sweet : ) Great write.
-Roxanne
this is very beautiful. Wish I could write so much in such a short poem.
Short and sweet, I like it. (:
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This is exactly what were are striving for in love! Short and to the point. Nicely done..
beautiful! simply beautiful!…
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Funny how you can inspire both sweet warmth and sadness with the same words. The pleasant feelings for what you have and share here, and the melancholy feelings for those of us who have never had the joy of 25 years together.
Nicely touching, in both ways.