Shawn L. Bird

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Old love November 6, 2010

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:46 am

Sighs floating on the

Whispers of wishes and dreams,

our future unfolds

Night after night

in kisses and caresses.

With whispered words in the darkness,

we’re wrapped in rapture

year after year.

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This poem is part of Jingle’s Poetry Rally Week 32

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/

 

 

28 Responses to “Old love”

  1. the love maybe old, but the passion I think remains same year after year! 🙂 nice one!

    My Rally Entry

  2. An enchanting piece. Well done.

  3. Sumit Sarkar Says:

    Wow…lovely poem…
    goes so well with the title…
    beautiful words… 🙂

  4. Jingle Says:

    old love,
    wow,
    beautiful portrayal of it.

  5. Jingle Says:

    Happy Rally,
    Happy Saturday.
    Thanks for the support.

  6. lovely poem. made me think of my mom and dad who were married for fifty odd years…

  7. ScottlB Says:

    New love is fine but as you say old love is fine like wine gets better with time. Nice post and thanks for dropping by

  8. actober Says:

    loved it.

  9. Jingle Says:

    Hello, how are you?
    Reminder;
    return favors to poets who are here for you,
    do 18 NEW comments….
    let me know after you are done.
    Thanks for the attention!
    Happy Saturday! xxx

    here is mine:
    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html

  10. Olivia Says:

    I am dreaming already
    * sigh *

    Love xox

  11. Olivia Says:

    Glad to read you today, hope all is well in your blogging or poetry writing agenda.
    We treasure your input and would be delighted to see you at our potluck again this coming Monday.
    Any poem is acceptable, simply link in and share…
    Let me know if you need further assistance.
    Keep writing, Keep inspiring!
    xoxox

  12. hope_rising Says:

    absolutely stunning! I love this poem!

  13. bward42 Says:

    Such a lovely little poem! It really does capture the beauty of love 🙂 Well done!

  14. Neha Says:

    The way we all wish it to be – to me your poem is hope. Love it.

  15. Short Poems Says:

    Such a beautiful poem, very well written. Loved it 🙂
    All the best
    Marinela x

  16. Malcolm McLachlan Says:

    What a delight to read. How much you say in so few lines.

  17. r0013 Says:

    Short, but so very sweet : ) Great write.
    -Roxanne

  18. likewine Says:

    this is very beautiful. Wish I could write so much in such a short poem.

  19. This is exactly what were are striving for in love! Short and to the point. Nicely done..

    http://chickunderconstruction.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/autumn-days/

  20. beautiful! simply beautiful!…

  21. -3- Says:

    Funny how you can inspire both sweet warmth and sadness with the same words. The pleasant feelings for what you have and share here, and the melancholy feelings for those of us who have never had the joy of 25 years together.
    Nicely touching, in both ways.


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