Shawn L. Bird

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poem-wishful February 7, 2018

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:21 pm
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Wistful

Wishful

A tank of fish full:

silver darting

Red Sea parting.

Make a way;

say your say.

Wistful

wish.

Full.

 

5 Responses to “poem-wishful”

  1. Proud_Clod's avatar Proud_Clod Says:

    I really like the rhyming scheme in this, can’t quite put my finger on it

  2. clcouch123's avatar clcouch123 Says:

    Has me thinking of jumprope, turned (and jumped) by clever, happy people. Thanks.

  3. Amy Jo Fleming's avatar Amy Jo Fleming Says:

    Sometimes you just have to be in the right mood for poetry.

  4. The consummate experience- a fish finding its way, in a parted Sea.

  5. playful and smart. enjoyed immensely.


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