waiting out of sight.
It hides in
into dark places’
with glorious abandon,
lingers, longing for you to see.
Today’s http://www.napowrimo.net prompt is to address a poem or component of a poem. I think the goal is to use apostrophe, but that’s not what I ended up with. Will metaphor/personification do?
i thought the poem was about beauty, or truth… and at its best, that is what poetry achieves. good choice of images & language. good work!
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Kimberly!
We strive for something we all know, but don’t have a word for.
Just love this one, Mrs. Bird!
Not a problem, i truly loved that piece of written art!
How the water up there?
Wet, as a rule.
i mean the lakes!
lol They’re blue and sparkling.
Wow! Lucky you….
Reblogged this on Thoughts Of Sand.
My thoughts are that your poetry evokes exploration, a tantalising peek into our true emotion. Thank you
My pleasure. Thank you for coming by, Ellen.
Yes. That’ll do friend. Quite nicely.
A poem about poetry! Far better it is, than a coffee table book about coffee tables. (Snide “Seinfeld” reference) :p
I think your idea of it was great Shawn describes poetry very well. Enjoyed reading it.
Thank you, Leona.
Simple message with beautiful words. I am pleased that I read one of your older posts.
Great poem, poetry can do this. Thanks for sharing!