Sculpting honey?
Pointless.
Shapes dissolve in moments,
dissappear in the gleaming
sweetness of now–
much like
memories
of you.
Sweet poem π
Ha ha. Thanks
Lol. No worries!!π
β€οΈβ€οΈ
very vivid..and viscous π
lol Thanks
Perhaps I read too much into it, but I like the double interpretation…either the obvious futility of sculpting honey, or this is simply a very nice way of telling someone they’re a lousy sculptor. π
π
Lovely, the hidden sweetness in memories of (I am thinking) loss.
Thanks for visiting, Amy!
love this…concise and beautifully stated…the message, unlike honey, is bittersweet. π
Thank you.
So this is my response to your poem
Drawing Sparrows
Endless lines of winter sparrows Appear upon my page. Common Yet beautiful I should be working Except that you have flown Away from me.
So lovely! π
Beautiful words π Thank you for enlighting my ordinary metro journey today !! β‘
Amanda | http://www.OrganicIsBeautiful.com
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Shawn Bird is an author, poet, and educator in the beautiful Shuswap region of British Columbia, Canada. She is a proud member of Rotary.
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Sweet poem π
Ha ha. Thanks
Lol. No worries!!π
β€οΈβ€οΈ
very vivid..and viscous π
lol
Thanks
Perhaps I read too much into it, but I like the double interpretation…either the obvious futility of sculpting honey, or this is simply a very nice way of telling someone they’re a lousy sculptor. π
π
Lovely, the hidden sweetness in memories of (I am thinking) loss.
Thanks for visiting, Amy!
love this…concise and beautifully stated…the message, unlike honey, is bittersweet. π
Thank you.
So this is my response to your poem
Drawing Sparrows
Endless lines of winter sparrows
Appear upon my page.
Common
Yet beautiful
I should be working
Except that you have flown
Away from me.
So lovely! π
Beautiful words π
Thank you for enlighting my ordinary metro journey today !! β‘
Amanda | http://www.OrganicIsBeautiful.com
Happy to be part of your journey!