Shawn L. Bird

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poem-dotty February 4, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:31 am
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Star speckled sky,

orbs orbiting,

motes in the sun beams,

circles circling,

dots on the shoes.

The most beautiful things in the world are round,

so I will celebrate my celestial shape.

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8 Responses to “poem-dotty”

  1. righteousbruin9 Says:
    February 4, 2016 at 7:42 am

    Roundness implies completion. Circles and hearts are really my favourites.

    Reply
  3. mpmckibbon Says:
    February 4, 2016 at 8:45 pm

    I began pear-shaped but get rounder every day…sigh. Thank you for a great perspective!

    Reply
  4. Poet Rummager Says:
    February 5, 2016 at 4:30 am

    Ha! I didn’t expect the last line or how it fits perfectly with the other heavenly bodies 🙂

    Reply

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