Shawn L. Bird

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poem- hopping November 5, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:10 pm
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Eyes hop

Butt hops

Head hops

Legs hop

Attention hops

School is difficult

for rabbits.

 

16 Responses to “poem- hopping”

  1. Josh Wrenn Says:
    November 5, 2015 at 1:35 pm

    Poor ADHD rabbits.

    Reply
  2. howardat58 Says:
    November 5, 2015 at 2:48 pm

    And don’t overlook IHOP, where eating is easy for humans.

    Reply
  3. vjearle Says:
    November 5, 2015 at 3:04 pm

    Hilarious! Great description of a classroom

    Reply
  4. abelprudhomme Says:
    November 5, 2015 at 4:39 pm

    Lolllll!!! Your so cool, Shawn! I love this!

    Reply
  5. righteousbruin9 Says:
    November 5, 2015 at 7:54 pm

    Good to see hopping butts! :p

    Reply
  6. Romancing Life Says:
    November 6, 2015 at 7:54 am

    Children, I see lots of children instead of bunnies! 😀

    Reply
  7. smithaw50 Says:
    November 7, 2015 at 3:54 am

    The ‘hops’ after each word was like concrete poetry. Clever.

    Reply

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