Shawn L. Bird

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poem-butter October 11, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:30 pm
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She studies his torso,

surveys lines and curves,

tracks

sinews

.  and

.    flesh,

melts,

wishes she was butter:

s p r e a d   o u t ,

simmering,

glistening

in those crevices,

turning into warm caramel

within his embrace.

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11 Responses to “poem-butter”

  1. sumyanna Says:
    October 11, 2015 at 5:45 pm

    The imagery! Excellent.

    Reply
  2. hooklineandinkwell Says:
    October 11, 2015 at 5:56 pm

    Great write!

    Reply
  3. Lorien Says:
    October 11, 2015 at 8:08 pm

    I love how deliberately sensuous and sexy this is. Being a sexy writer takes courage! *applause*

    Reply
  4. righteousbruin9 Says:
    October 11, 2015 at 8:28 pm

    Sweet, and far from syrupy.

    Reply
  5. Melody J Haislip Says:
    October 12, 2015 at 11:24 am

    My, it’s warm in here.

    Reply

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