Shawn L. Bird

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poem- I’ll remember October 7, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:01 am
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There’s a string around my finger.

The groceries are bought.

The mail is collected.

The birthday cards are mailed.

The appointments are made.

The kids are picked up.

Nothing’s forgotten.

There’s a string ’round my finger

for remembering you.

 

 

16 Responses to “poem- I’ll remember”

  1. pavanneh Says:
    October 7, 2015 at 9:25 am

    Sometimes I think I need a string around my finger so I don’t forget someone in the rush of life.

    Reply
  2. jade0207 Says:
    October 7, 2015 at 9:40 am

    Bold and sweet. Nice!

    Reply
  3. righteousbruin9 Says:
    October 7, 2015 at 1:10 pm

    You have it all nailed.

    Reply
  4. thefeatheredsleep Says:
    October 8, 2015 at 6:04 pm

    Very clever!!♡♡

    Reply
  5. clarechfam Says:
    October 8, 2015 at 6:46 pm

    Precisely and endearing. Good one.

    Reply
  7. alexandercasillas Says:
    October 24, 2015 at 1:44 am

    Sometimes you even need a string around your finger to remember yourself in the pace of life. Love this piece!

    Reply

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