Shawn L. Bird

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poem- boxed September 21, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 8:14 pm
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You’re inside a box,

safe within your preconceptions,

covered with the dirt of mediocrity,

buried alive.

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14 Responses to “poem- boxed”

  1. hooklineandinkwell Says:
    September 21, 2015 at 8:22 pm

    Boxes are okay for somet things, but never should we place ourselves in one…love it

    Reply
  2. righteousbruin9 Says:
    September 21, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    That would be my vision of Hell.

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  3. cheryl622014 Says:
    September 22, 2015 at 2:16 am

    Please God no That’s my idea of hell

    Reply
  4. howardat58 Says:
    September 22, 2015 at 9:44 am

    Clearly a Poincare type of box. Feels infinite on the inside, but we on the outside can see that it is finite, and quite small.
    Here’s a link:
    http://mathworld.wolfram.com/PoincareHyperbolicDisk.html

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  5. thefeatheredsleep Says:
    September 22, 2015 at 2:35 pm

    Stunning just love it

    Reply

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