Shawn L. Bird

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haiku-gratification July 15, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:35 am
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Three times a charm

at least for him, pumping joyfully.

She stairs at the ceiling.


15 Responses to “haiku-gratification”

  1. Karin Says:

    Oh snap! 😉
    Great haiku Shawn!

  2. Melody J Haislip Says:

    This may be my most favorite of all your poems. It contained a whole universe of meaning. 🙂

  3. “Stares,” not “stairs.” Haiku is great writing discipline.

  4. Mutual it is; otherwise, satisfaction isn’t.

  5. jburns58 Says:

    Shawn , that statement could mean a lot of things. Whatever it is, has to be pleasant

  6. Pollie Math Says:

    Five stars from me!

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