haiku-gratification

haiku-gratification July 15, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:35 am
Tags: couple, haiku, micropoem, micropoetry, poem, poetry, relationship

Three times a charm

at least for him, pumping joyfully.

She stairs at the ceiling.

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15 Responses to “haiku-gratification”

Karin Says:
July 15, 2015 at 10:38 am
Oh snap! 😉
Great haiku Shawn!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 15, 2015 at 12:55 pm
  😉
  
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Melody J Haislip Says:
July 15, 2015 at 12:06 pm
This may be my most favorite of all your poems. It contained a whole universe of meaning. 🙂

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 15, 2015 at 12:55 pm
  lol
  Thanks Melody.
  
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seanarthurjoyce Says:
July 15, 2015 at 12:31 pm
“Stares,” not “stairs.” Haiku is great writing discipline.

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 15, 2015 at 12:56 pm
  I was going to fix that, but then I thought perhaps she is climbing somewhere (or hopes to)
  
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righteousbruin9 Says:
July 15, 2015 at 12:37 pm
Mutual it is; otherwise, satisfaction isn’t.

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 15, 2015 at 12:57 pm
  Not necessarily. Making someone else happy can be satisfying, otherwise we wouldn’t give gifts?
  
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  - righteousbruin9 Says:
    July 15, 2015 at 2:52 pm
    I was thinking of the more specific matter, but, you’re right- I have always felt better giving than receiving.
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    July 15, 2015 at 3:05 pm
    lol
    That reminds me of a Friends episode…
jburns58 Says:
July 15, 2015 at 3:56 pm
Shawn , that statement could mean a lot of things. Whatever it is, has to be pleasant

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 15, 2015 at 4:00 pm
  😉
  
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  - jburns58 Says:
    July 15, 2015 at 4:23 pm
    Thank you.
Pollie Math Says:
July 16, 2015 at 10:40 pm
Five stars from me!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  July 16, 2015 at 11:49 pm
  Thanks, Pollie
  
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