Shawn L. Bird

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poem-waiting February 25, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:24 am
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She’s waiting for the words

he will not say.

She’s waiting for the words

he should not say.

She’s waiting for the words

he does not say.

She’s waiting for the words

he could not say.

She’s waiting for the words

he can not say.

She’s waiting for the words.

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26 Responses to “poem-waiting”

  1. If those words are, “Will You Marry Me?” I’d tell her to stop waiting, dump him and go live your life. That’s what I did and never look back! Living Single! Living Golden!

  2. Love this poem. Short yet rich with feeling, deep emotion. Awesome

  3. Jarrod C Says:

    The waiting is the hardest part.

  4. “I love you” I heard it as an echo whispered softly after each “he ____ not say”…

  5. inkstinct Says:

    waiting in vain…he is saying it without words!

  6. vierareign Says:

    “She’s waiting for the words he should not say” Because she doesn’t know what to do after hearing it! HahaxD Love this one.


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