Shawn L. Bird

14 Responses to “poem-awkward”

1. carljpoetry Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 3:10 am

   Short yet very powerful! I really like this 🙂

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 5, 2015 at 8:53 am

     Thank you, Carl.

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2. cutelilgypsy Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 3:48 am

   nailed it!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 5, 2015 at 8:53 am

     Thanks, Michele.

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3. cutelilgypsy Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 3:49 am

   Reblogged this on bohemiangypsy and commented:
   yeah she just summed it up!!!

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4. righteousbruin9 Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 8:54 am

   No pants on fire in bed!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 5, 2015 at 10:57 am

     I think flames are involved.

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5. dancingpalmtrees Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 10:59 am

   Yes. That’s exactly what happens. Trust betrayed on so many levels.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 5, 2015 at 12:15 pm

     Indeed.

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6. transcend18 Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 12:41 pm

   Upon her house
   A darkened cloud descends
   He left like a mouse,
   Leaving the girl with dead ends

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 5, 2015 at 2:38 pm

     I think she might be the dead end. Hmm.

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7. yprior1 Says:

   January 5, 2015 at 8:31 pm

   I like the short yet potent part too – nice zinger…

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     January 6, 2015 at 9:30 am

     Thank you.

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     • yprior1 Says:

       January 6, 2015 at 1:05 pm

       🙂