He needs a bed,
and she has one,
so she welcomes him to it,
and he lies.
Short yet very powerful! I really like this 🙂
Thank you, Carl.
Reblogged this on bohemiangypsy and commented:
yeah she just summed it up!!!
No pants on fire in bed!
I think flames are involved.
Yes. That’s exactly what happens. Trust betrayed on so many levels.
Upon her house
A darkened cloud descends
He left like a mouse,
Leaving the girl with dead ends
I think she might be the dead end. Hmm.
I like the short yet potent part too – nice zinger…
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Shawn Bird is a high school English teacher, poet, and YA author in the beautiful Shuswap region of British Columbia, Canada. She is a proud member of Rotary and a former Rotary Youth Exchange Student.
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