Shawn L. Bird

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poem- ready December 9, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:47 pm
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Oh, she’s ready

all right.

And you’ll be

regretting

that tone of voice

before the evening’s

over.

 

15 Responses to “poem- ready”

  1. dancingpalmtrees's avatar dancingpalmtrees Says:
    December 9, 2014 at 5:49 pm

    Uh Oh!! Sounds like she’s ready for a show down at the OK Corral. Cue Gary Cooper! High Noon or Midnight Throw Down!!

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  2. Rose Red's avatar Rose Red Says:
    December 9, 2014 at 5:53 pm

    I think she’s holding the reins

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  3. Sagittarian Seeker's avatar righteousbruin9 Says:
    December 9, 2014 at 6:36 pm

    She ALWAYS has the last word, and gets in the last licks.

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  4. Caro's avatar Caro Says:
    December 9, 2014 at 9:20 pm

    This is quite savvy and fun yet a vein of uh-oh all over it! Cool poem

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  5. madsadyak's avatar madsadyak Says:
    December 9, 2014 at 9:25 pm

    some one has to go first might as well be …………….
    not me!!!!!!!!!!
    just kidding

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  6. vsvevg's avatar vsvevg Says:
    December 10, 2014 at 10:31 am

    Been there, both sides 🙂

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  7. cheryl622014's avatar cheryl622014 Says:
    December 11, 2014 at 12:09 pm

    Perhaps in the same vein As my Mum would say – don’t look at me in that tone of voice young lady!

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