Shawn L. Bird

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poem-going November 18, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 6:44 pm
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You’re going and now I think

of all the things that could have been

and all the things that should have been

and all the things that would have been

if only you’d been forthcoming

before you left.

 

9 Responses to “poem-going”

  1. georgiakevin Says:
    November 18, 2014 at 6:58 pm

    Yet another of your poems with a wallop, wow!

    Reply
  2. howardat58 Says:
    November 18, 2014 at 7:38 pm

    You should be grateful that they went. Half the unmarried males over 30 are still living with Mom and Pop !

    Reply
  3. righteousbruin9 Says:
    November 19, 2014 at 2:31 pm

    What will be is the stepchild of what is.

    Reply

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