Shawn L. Bird

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poem- spinning October 1, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:04 am
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Head

floating

above my day.

Sickness

beckoning.

 

22 Responses to “poem- spinning”

  1. redgladiola's avatar redgladiola Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:08 am

    Feel better soon!

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  2. Tom Balistreri's avatar Tom Balistreri Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:10 am

    It’s hard to “like” someone feeling sick . Be well. 🙂

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  3. Coach D's avatar Dai Verse Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:26 am

    I hope this is a work of fiction. If not, please try not to spread it around 😉

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  4. vsvevg's avatar vsvevg Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:46 am

    Hope that’s just a metaphor! take care, a

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  5. Oliana's avatar Oliana @Tracesofthesoul Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:54 am

    Oh dear…it’s going around down here too:(

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  6. Jeff Schwaner's avatar Jeff Schwaner Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 10:25 am

    Short and sweet. Just right.

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  7. dancingpalmtrees's avatar dancingpalmtrees Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 10:42 am

    Uh! Oh! Sounds like it’s time for some Green Tea or Ginger Tea. Please get rest and feel better soon.

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  8. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 11:01 am

    I know this feeling……😳

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  9. dokurtybitz's avatar dokurtybitz Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 4:31 pm

    Feel better *hugs*

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  10. Sagittarian Seeker's avatar righteousbruin9 Says:
    October 1, 2014 at 9:40 pm

    Sickness becomes a lead weight. Still, the mind can soar!

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