Shawn L. Bird

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poem- done September 19, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:21 pm
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It

is

done.

I

am

done.

We

are

done.

What

is

beginning

?

 

15 Responses to “poem- done”

  1. Thomas M. Watt Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 12:23 pm

    Me and Shawn L. Bird, that’s what.

    Reply
  3. narble Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 12:42 pm

    Beginning? A positive adventure is one of your choices.

    Reply
  4. billremski Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 1:32 pm

    Hi Shawn, sad poem. Do you like The Pogues?

    Reply
  5. davidprosser Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 1:44 pm

    A better future I hope.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx

    Reply
  6. Sarah Magnolia Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 3:25 pm

    Interesting theme of ending and beginning. I really liked it!

    Reply
  7. mamta Says:
    September 19, 2014 at 10:54 pm

    The minimalism works beautifully and makes it very effective.

    Reply

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