Shawn L. Bird

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poem- layers August 31, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:53 pm
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In your laughter

I can hear

your tears.

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29 Responses to “poem- layers”

  1. Des Says:

    a simple but impactful poem.

  2. myleyes Says:

    We humans are such ironical compilations of emotion

  3. Zula Julia Says:

    I love this, for the same reason as Des.

  4. qwietpleez Says:

    Simple elegance and truth in 8 little words . . . Beautiful.

  5. So much like the tears of the clown

  6. davidprosser Says:

    Ha, sounds like you’re analysing me this week.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx

  7. anthemlegalpro Says:

    Beautiful!

  8. tt4r Says:

    Ha ha ha. I’m glad you do, thank you!

  9. Joanne Corey Says:

    Reblogged this on Top of JC's Mind and commented:
    Shawn L. Bird can say a lot in a few words.

  10. simonfalk28 Says:

    Poignant. I like it.

  11. xscapiism Says:

    I don’t know why but this really got me.

  12. Crystal Barnes Says:

    A powerful statement in just 3 short lines–love it!

  13. namesconnie Says:

    Such feelings in so few words. Very good! Sincerely, Connie Webb


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