G r e e n e y e s,
h o l d m y h e a r t
t i g h t l y a g a i n s t y o u r s ;
l e t t h e i r c o m b i n e d r h y t h m
~ s y n c o p a t e d m e m o r i e s ~
d a n c e i n o u r
e m b r a c e .
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Happy Anniversary, handsome. Sam Heughan has nothing on you.
Shawn L. Bird 
So lovely!
Thanks, Caroline
Wow. I’m impressed. NIce job with the poem and its graphic layout.
lol Thanks, Cheryl.
I like it, but you have sent me on a wild goose chase after the word sycopation. (wordpress just changed it to syncopation). They have to be the same, some web stuff uses both interchangeably.
Oh you folks do a such a good job of catching my typos! lol
I will fix it. 😉
Woow. Nice!
Thanks, Rajiv.
I love the poem, but I must commend the graphic layout because I suck at that sort of thing
I like shape (aka concrete) poems, though they are generally considered a hold out from the 70s. They are usually an accident. I centre them and see what I have. At first I thought this was a heart (splitting the first 2 lines) but then I noticed it was eye shaped, and since that fit I left it. Then I thought, “I should make it a green eye!” So I played with colour and ended up with this. It was just serendipity, truly.
Lol I by far am not that creative
My students say that all the time. I can generally prove them wrong! 😉 Feel free to take risks. You have nothing to lose.
You are right, I’ll be sure to do that
Good girl.
or boy.
or transgendered person.
Male lol
No hints in that email address at all. lol
Good BOY. 😉
love this.
Thanks
beautiful shape poetry.
Thanks Kora-Leah!