Shawn L. Bird

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poem- perfection July 7, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:11 am
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The poem is entitled Tiger Lily

but the accompanying photo

shows a Stargazer Lily.

I am trying not to mind.

 

12 Responses to “poem- perfection”

  1. ak's avatar akpoetess Says:

    I laughed when I read this. Maybe it’s my brain’s unique design features but I have a block when it comes to poetry accompanied by pictures. I think words should be strong enough to stand alone. Oh yeah, I love reading your work.

    • I think an accompanying picture often detracts from the poem’s own imagery, myself. Though WordPress won’t ‘Freshly Press’ a blog post unless it has a photo. Hence, I have never been freshly pressed. (I don’t often iron, either). πŸ˜‰

  2. Henry St. Brelade's avatar alfredsalmanac Says:

    Love it. Very clever indeed.

  3. joegergen's avatar joegergen Says:

    Lot’s of thoughts going on around about perfectionism. Must be in the water. Or the flowers. Nicely done.

  4. Annette Rochelle Aben's avatar Annette Rochelle Aben Says:

    funny.. I just took photos of the Tiger Lillies in my yard..

  5. I also laughed when I read this. πŸ™‚ If someone is going to use a photo to accompany a poem, they should at least know what the photo contains!

  6. My two sons are Autistic and perfect with their Autism even though I complain a lot buy hey I’m the Klutz Queen so in a way I’m Perfect too!
    Highly over rated perfection especially with cleaning!


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