Shawn L. Bird

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poem-hurt June 26, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:08 am
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I regret

giving you

the last

ice cream

treat.

 

 

 

29 Responses to “poem-hurt”

  1. The Hopeful Herbalist's avatar The Hopeful Herbalist Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 2:12 am

    Ah, learning to ask for what you need…. 😉

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  2. louisglazzawrites's avatar louis30092013 Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 2:19 am

    I love it

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  4. davidprosser's avatar davidprosser Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 2:46 am

    Ooh,It must be bad to generate that response.
    xxx Huge Hugs xxx

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  5. Sharmishtha's avatar Sharmishtha Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 3:20 am

    bad bad musie…

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  6. Sucheta Biswas's avatar sb2711 Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 4:00 am

    good one there 😀

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  7. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 5:44 am

    dang – well, the next time you will know better:)

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  9. Jim Stewart's avatar narble Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 6:34 am

    Ice cream can be cruel.

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  10. mincs1's avatar mincs1 Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 4:54 pm

    This sounds like something I would do! 🙂

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  11. pi314chron's avatar pi314chron Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 8:16 pm

    Next time, secretly let the dog(s) lick it before offering him the treat! Just a thought!

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  12. PrairieChat's avatar PrairieChat Says:
    June 26, 2014 at 9:35 pm

    I think you need to buy more ice cream 🙂

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  13. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:
    June 28, 2014 at 12:36 pm

    Optical screech in excess is scary …

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