Shawn L. Bird

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poem- love story April 27, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:20 am
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He says

her laughing smile

captivated him.

The smartest girl in the school

he thought, as he sat silently

at the back of the class.

Too good for him.

The only girl who listens

to that crap classical music

that you like, they told him.

So he braved to venture a date,

but she turned him down

in favour of dorm pork chops

He was determined,

and Mozart entertained

Before she knew what had happened

she had a ring on her finger,

and a lifetime

of devotion promised.

Her laughing smile is

not quite as captivating,

she’s unlikely to be

the most intelligent

in the room,

time brings rationalization,

after all

she says he’s too good for her

with laughing eyes

that are still his.

 

38 Responses to “poem- love story”

  1. Rajiv's avatar Rajiv Says:

    Marvellous poem. An allegory on love and life

  2. This was so heartwarming. It took me back to my high school days and romance 🙂

  3. K. A. Bryce's avatar K. A. Brace Says:

    Reblogged this on The Mirror Obscura and commented:
    A poignant poem for a Sunday morning well written. >KB

  4. K. A. Bryce's avatar K. A. Brace Says:

    Please don’t be offended by the photo of Divine I put up on my home page. It’s wry humor and it will get readers interested to read the rest of the poem.>KB I’ll take it down for something else if you want.

  5. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:

    A lovely story – and (having recently been listening to lots, including Reger’s variations) I like the Mozart background music.

  6. susanissima's avatar susanissima Says:

    A universal story, captured beautifully, Shawn.

  7. Connie's avatar Connie Says:

    Beautiful, Shawn, and so like my experience when I met my most handsome, most intelligent, sweetest guy, who has been my husband for thirty-seven years.

  8. Veda's avatar Veda Says:

    A beautiful story poured into the glass as wine of poetry…. liked it

  9. J Forest's avatar J Forest Says:

    This hits me hard.

  10. babedarla's avatar babedarla Says:

    That was beautiful!

  11. alishasunshine's avatar alishasunshine Says:

    Funny how that happens … great poem.

  12. soarintothefuture's avatar soarintothefuture Says:

    This was lovely! Thanks for sharing. 🙂

  13. Ah perfect romantic Spring poem 🙂

  14. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:

    Dorm pork chops – that is a priceless term!!

  15. kitwest61's avatar kitwest61 Says:

    Rational love is an oxymoron…😉 but I say that only from my experience. Desire is a craziness that burns so intensely fierce. Love is a tree that grows its roots between two trees. Have you ever read Captain Corelli’s Mandolin? There’s a beautiful passage about love spoken by the old doctor to his daughter. Your poem led me back to that. Thank you. I really enjoyed all that you brought. Kind regards K.


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