Shawn L. Bird

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poem-magic mirror March 31, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:55 am
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The lake has captured the sky

reflecting clouds on blue silk,

shore lines doubled,

snow dusted trees, like brushes,

paint mist

suspended half way between reality

in a magic mirror of spring.

 

20 Responses to “poem-magic mirror”

  1. Genie Says:

    “The lake has captured the sky”

    Love the image, very creative.

  2. Megha Patel Says:

    beautiful!

  3. poetry is so beautiful when done in prose especially by you
    amazing words

  4. I like your use of rhythm, its very easy on the tongue. This is really good.

  5. davidprosser Says:

    Beautiful Shawn and exactly as it is.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx

  6. I think it is an exquisite capture of the landscape. Lakes are magic.

  7. Abhishekizy Says:

    You have a magic in you sweetheart, never let it go!

  8. words4jp Says:

    Again, you have created a perfect photograph – in words.

  9. motherbethel Says:

    I enjoyed the word- picture. Lovely….

  10. Rasma Haidri Says:

    Thanks for stopping by Whole in the Head and liking my poem. And thanks for this magic mirror – it takes me places. Happy Poetry Month!


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