Shawn L. Bird

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poem-magic mirror March 31, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:55 am
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The lake has captured the sky

reflecting clouds on blue silk,

shore lines doubled,

snow dusted trees, like brushes,

paint mist

suspended half way between reality

in a magic mirror of spring.

 

20 Responses to “poem-magic mirror”

  1. poetseer's avatar Genie Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 9:57 am

    “The lake has captured the sky”

    Love the image, very creative.

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  2. Megha Patel's avatar Megha Patel Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 10:35 am

    beautiful!

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  3. jamesmendezaz's avatar jamesmendezaz Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 10:44 am

    poetry is so beautiful when done in prose especially by you
    amazing words

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  4. O.D.'s avatar original-dante Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 10:53 am

    I like your use of rhythm, its very easy on the tongue. This is really good.

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  5. davidprosser's avatar davidprosser Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 1:06 pm

    Beautiful Shawn and exactly as it is.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx

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  6. http://theenglishprofessoratlarge.com's avatar http://theenglishprofessoratlarge.com Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 1:12 pm

    I think it is an exquisite capture of the landscape. Lakes are magic.

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  7. Aabby's avatar Abhishekizy Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 2:32 pm

    You have a magic in you sweetheart, never let it go!

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  8. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:
    March 31, 2014 at 6:02 pm

    Again, you have created a perfect photograph – in words.

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  9. krissymosleyministries's avatar motherbethel Says:
    April 1, 2014 at 7:58 pm

    I enjoyed the word- picture. Lovely….

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  10. Rasma Haidri's avatar Rasma Haidri Says:
    April 2, 2014 at 12:34 pm

    Thanks for stopping by Whole in the Head and liking my poem. And thanks for this magic mirror – it takes me places. Happy Poetry Month!

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