Shawn L. Bird

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poem- Pacific sunset December 27, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 8:46 am
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She sits

above the sky

silently watching

sun on shore

sliding to the horizon

dropping

slowly

beyond the sea.

 

8 Responses to “poem- Pacific sunset”

  1. Morgan Says:

    Beautiful 🙂 Makes me want to go sit on the beach!

  2. wbdeejay Says:

    Her gaze
    Passes
    over all
    Warming hearts
    And
    Bringing life.

  3. doncarroll Says:

    the one that is always out of reach. I do love the metaphor here.

  4. Y. Prior Says:

    so nice (again!!) and in this one, I like how the sun could be dropping slowly beyond the sea – or she could be….


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