Shawn L. Bird

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poem- lift off December 10, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:06 pm
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I believed,

I really did.

I told myself,

‘It will be.”

But I hoarded words.

I wished,

I wondered,

I waited.

I held my words tightly.

It is bold

to send words away

to find their friends.

But when words

are shared

worlds are opened

to new horizons.

Life lifts off

when we believe

in our words,

and set them free.

 

21 Responses to “poem- lift off”

  1. syl65's avatar syl65 Says:

    This is really nice and uplifting. Thank you Shawn.

  2. Chojin Bain's avatar Chojin Bain Says:

    very beautiful thanks πŸ™‚

  3. Ron's avatar pi314chron Says:

    Provocative and philosophical are two words that come to mind. This is Shawn at her best! *** πŸ™‚ ***

    Ron

    http://randalane.wordpress.com

  4. toad (chris jensen)'s avatar toad (chris jensen) Says:

    Thank you for likes Shawn.

  5. toad (chris jensen)'s avatar toad (chris jensen) Says:

    Reblogged this on Keptmeprisoner.

  6. wbdeejay's avatar wbdeejay Says:

    The last 4 lines really got me …believe in our words…
    Yes!

  7. I am a woman of many words, and this touches me.

  8. Blackbird's avatar Blackbird Says:

    Love this. “..hoarded words”…great! I will enjoy reading more…and thank you so much for visiting my blog…I appreciate it!

  9. blkbuttaflie's avatar blkbuttaflie Says:

    oh my. Do you mind if I reblog this? It really hit me πŸ™‚ Following you now! lol

  10. blkbuttaflie's avatar blkbuttaflie Says:

    Reblogged this on An Unleashed Butterfly and commented:
    Some say silence is key but when you are keeping those things to yourself, you set yourself up for an earthquake in the end. Say what you mean, mean what you say.
    Set your words free or better yet, set yourself free!

    • That, too. Personally, I was thinking more about being a writer and embracing it. Not being afraid to share your work with the public, etc. It’s always fascinating to see what readers bring to a poem and the twists they put on the interpretation. As an English teacher, I expect my students to bring their life experience to their literary explorations, and so their interpretation is always valid. I am not fond of professors who think there is one right answer. Art is an individual experience both as creator and receiver.


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