Shawn L. Bird

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poem- sunset November 21, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:56 am
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The sun departs

leaving snowy hills

blushing

 

10 Responses to “poem- sunset”

  1. Geraldine Helen Hartman's avatar Geraldine Says:

    oh, very nice! πŸ™‚

  2. wbdeejay's avatar wbdeejay Says:

    Imagination
    fills in
    the gaps

  3. macjam47's avatar macjam47 Says:

    Beautiful imagery.

  4. chaotican's avatar chaotican Says:

    Blushing. That is truly beautiful.
    It makes me wonder if we all see the same image in our (collective?) minds. The same exposed hillside, fading into nightfall but first an orange hue and a feeling of exposure mixed with modesty. Really beautiful, thank you.

    • I took a photo as I stepped out of school, because the evening was coming, the evergreen hills all around me were blue grey with a dusting of new snow, and the tops of the hills were all pink. It was so pretty, it required a poem. πŸ™‚ So- that’s what I saw.

  5. Sue Marquis Bishop's avatar sue marquis bishop Says:

    Shawn, you brighten the day leaving crumbs of beauty in your wake.. I’m a fan. Sue womenlivinglifeafter50.com


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