Shawn L. Bird

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poem- poem breath October 6, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:09 pm
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I breathe in a poem

inhaling words and images

savouring the rhythm, colour, and aroma

flowing through lungs, heart, veins,

capilliaries and arteries.

I exhale the moment

and the poem,

it goes

free.

 

24 Responses to “poem- poem breath”

  1. I know the feeling all too well…It’s there one second, gone the next

  2. I love this! The visuals are amazing.

  3. nersonangelo's avatar nersonangelo Says:

    True! That’s why we stop eating or wakeup 3am and grab a pen.. 🙂

  4. Wow, Thanks Shawn. I felt this one in my soul, breathed in its beauty and let it fly away with my breath! :

  5. Moniba's avatar Moniba Says:

    Amazing!! It really does read free 🙂

  6. Noora's avatar Noora Says:

    Stunning piece, Shawn!

  7. WHAT POEM? I MIGHT WANT TO EXPERIENCE THE SAME FEELING

  8. Chess's avatar Chess Says:

    Nicely done.

  9. Shawn, it seems that you have a lot of excellent work going on over seas. I can always appreciate someone who shares my affinity for poetry and writing. I am a bit new to the scene but am trying to just experiment with the art form, similar to how I work with visual art. Thanks for following my blog and looking forward to speaking with you more. Your book sounds pretty awesome. How did you get started with that one in regards to inspiration?

    Thanks so much and be well.

    Alexander.

  10. xcentrical's avatar xcentrical Says:

    this is beautiful!


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