Shawn L. Bird

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haiku- autumn October 4, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:16 pm
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One cold night

And suddenly the world is dappled

With gold and red

 

19 Responses to “haiku- autumn”

  1. Lovely!! I was shocked to feel the cold…I must travel to the eastern townships to see the leaves…to you they are hills in BC but here they are mountains ๐Ÿ™‚ Bon weekend!

    • My father laughs at Mont Real. But Colline Real doesn’t have quite the same ring, does it? When he was a boy growing up in Montreal, he actually thought that was what a mountain looked like–and then he moved to BC! ๐Ÿ™‚ Bon weekend a toi!

      • Whoa!! I know Mont Royale and Mont Bruno are hills…lol but I’m visiting Mount Sutton and Orford this weekend…I was raised in the Eastern townships…with mountains and lakes and rivers:) Salut et bon weekend:)

  2. That cold night was plenty generous–it turns out.

  3. heather anne's avatar taehreh Says:

    There’s a moment every year where suddenly I notice- fall is here… like it’s crept up without my knowing. Always beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Miranda Stone's avatar Miranda Stone Says:

    It seems as though the leaves here have turned overnight! This haiku describes the sudden transformation perfectly.

  5. Renders a beautiful image of such a wonderful time of year. Nicely done.

  6. Love it! That’s right up there with the 6 word poems. VERY to the point and says a lot. Good job!

  7. Love it! Yep, it really is sometimes that quick isn’t it…I love the seasons… H xxx

    • I’m so glad to live in a place that has them for the allotted time! Here the seasons pretty consistently match the seasons of our Northern Hemisphere calendar. When lived in ‘Northern BC’ (i.e. smack in the middle of BC!) We had snow for 6 months, mud for 4 months, and bugs for two months. Calgary could throw a snow storm at us any time of year. 4 seasons are wonderful.


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