Shawn L. Bird

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poem-storming August 7, 2013

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:17 am
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Whitecaps roiling

Water boiling

Waves pitching

Whirlpools spinning

Pull out the spoon,

Sit down, drink up

the storm you’re stirring

in your cup.

 

21 Responses to “poem-storming”

  1. Georgia's avatar Bastet Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 2:34 am

    Fantastic! Loved it! 😀

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  2. unfetteredbs's avatar unfetteredbs Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 2:39 am

    Drinking up! Good morning

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  3. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 4:22 am

    Yes, indeed it was – my tea was a bit rumbly this morning!

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  4. ghostinthewalls's avatar ghostinthewalls Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 5:04 am

    I keep saying that WP needs other buttons than just the “like” button. I would have pushed the “awesome” button on this one. Love the visual you’ve painted here. 🙂 ~ Bill

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  5. Annie's Muse's avatar Annie's Muse Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 6:02 am

    This describes me every morning:)

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  6. Niki Kozak's avatar gleaningthenuggets Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 6:08 am

    love it, very original 🙂

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  8. fibee5's avatar fibee5 Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 7:04 am

    haha I like this, I wasn’t expecting that ending 🙂

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  9. pilbra's avatar Bee Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 12:11 pm

    very clever I wasn’t expecting that ending either

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  10. Megan E Eddy's avatar Megan E. Eddy Says:
    August 7, 2013 at 11:06 pm

    I really like that. C=

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