your breath
drifts across my nostrils
soft as dandelion dreams,
floats past my ears
whispering mystic riddles,
touches my lips
with promised kisses,
lingers like laughter
o’er our tomorrow.
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Pondering workshop advice from Garry Gottfriedson at Word on the Lake. “Love poems should use soft sounds,” and “never mention the word love…”
Shawn L. Bird 
You paint a wonderful picture with words Shawn..The words flow so easily . xx Huge Hugs xx
Thanks. I like this one a lot.
Great image…loved it 🙂
I’m glad!
Perfect fusion of form and feeling!
Thank you.
Shawn- Iove this poem’s layout! It’s beautifully written. -Mike
Thanks Mike. Ideally I’d like the ending of the left lines to be the beginning, one line below, of the next line, but that’s challenging in WordPress, so I settled for this variation. Glad you like it.
Man, WordPress is teh suck when it comes to layout. I’m right there with you.