Shawn L. Bird

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The Thing September 7, 2011

With a bump and a grunt I started to jump

What was that by the cat?  That thing with the lump?

Something scary

and hairy.

Something wiggling!

(I’m jiggly!)

It is black on its back

It is red on its head.

That bit on the paw,

Was that yellow I saw?I

Those colours so bright are making me weep

from the fright.

I fear it will come near

Will bump into me here?

It will leap while I sleep!

Will it beat me? Or eat me?

I stared and I shivered

It glared and I quivered.

It wiggled closer to me

A tingle ran through me.

A step closer it came

And then closer again!

I just couldn’t help it: I shrieked.

Then the thing, well, it leaked

A small yellow puddle

Of a fellow in a muddle.

Its head tilted down

On its face a sad frown,

From its eyes dripped a trickle.

Oh my! That’s a pickle.

Is it looked up at me, I thought, “Could it be

That the thing over there, That thing covered in hair,

that thing coming near Is not something to fear?

If it leaked when I shrieked,

Did it think I was scary?

Did it think I was hairy?

With black on my head

My back covered in red?

So I took one step nearer and the creature came clearer.

It was cute.  It was fuzzy. It was really quite lovely!

I dropped to my knees as the thing gently sneezed.

“Hello Thing,” I said.  “My name is Fred.”

“Can I be your friend?”

(True story)

The End.


22 Responses to “The Thing”

  1. Morning Says:

    you remind of Dr. Seuss,

    lovely humor shown …fantastic entry.

  2. Jack Edwards Says:

    Such an engaging and vivid poem. Loved it.

    Here is my entry:

  3. I want what she’s having! Great twisting and tangling to come out with something good. Very enteresting and fun.

    My entry:

  4. You left me smiling at the end of this. Love your work and can not wait to read more

  5. Except now I am curious about what the thing was.


  6. admirable..
    thanks for sharing.


  7. Jo Bryant Says:

    Got a smile from this thanks 🙂

  8. Dr. Seuss is that you? hehehe nice one!

  9. kez Says:

    thank you for the chuckles ….great for a friday chill thank you x

  10. CC Champagne Says:

    And a smile from me as well! Nice write! *smile*

  11. Cherlyn Says:

    Aww that was cute – super adorable poem! Thanks for sharing 🙂

  12. Ector Ward Says:

    Love the turn from fear to pity, then love grows.

  13. ShonEjai Says:

    You put a smile in my face this Sunday morning. Thank you!

  14. Manoj Kewalramani Says:

    ahhh brilliant stuff..

    here’s my entry this week:

    Happy rally!

  15. Nate Says:

    aww.. there’s a cute story behind.. nice.. 🙂

  16. Nefarious X Says:

    This was best thing I’ve read in awhile.
    It was fun and enjoyed it.

    It flowed nicely, engaged me from the start and
    ended well.
    nice work

  17. frayedges Says:

    Fun, happy poem. I loved it!

  18. wow, profound humor and talent. you rock.

    hope all is well.


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