Shawn L. Bird

4 Responses to “pieces of sky”

1. Ravenblack Says:

   July 11, 2011 at 6:12 am

   Beautiful and surreal imagery. 🙂 Enjoyed this.

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2. Jingle Says:

   July 11, 2011 at 10:07 am

   lovely summer emotions, well done.,

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3. Jeanie McBain Says:

   July 14, 2011 at 12:58 am

   Lovely piece of poetry I enjoyed reading it very much 🙂

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4. Shashi Says:

   July 14, 2011 at 9:58 am

   Opening lines were so powerful… and I could actually feel the image of flattened summer…

   ‘Pieces of sky
   fall upon flowers
   and flatten summer.’

   I really liked this verse…

   Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43, which I am hosting for the first time, this week. Hope you have enjoyed it and I look forward to seeing you next week too with your lovely poetry…

   Shashi
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   Om Namah Shivaya
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