Shawn L. Bird

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snow haiku November 19, 2010

Filed under: Commentary — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:28 am
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Gentle crystals fall.
Dancing through the frost filled air,
winter comes again

 

 

 

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24 Responses to “snow haiku”

  1. Jingle Says:

    wow, lovely snow poetry.
    Thanks for sharing…
    u rock,
    busy yet make it easy for me, …
    love to have you.
    xx

  2. beautiful ku! 🙂 I love reading haiku’s but so scared to attempt writing. Takes much skill to pull that off…and you have here! 🙂 thanks for the read on my potluck! 🙂
    Kellie

  3. ScottlB Says:

    Nice image here like your first word “Gentle” feeling of peace

  4. Amity Says:

    I feel cold with your haiku…it’s beautiful… 🙂

  5. Neha Says:

    Awesome, I can feel the chill in the air!

  6. Jessicas Japes Says:

    very cute, like the use of the word ‘dancing’.

    Happy rally!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/

  7. fiveloaf Says:

    christmas is coming!

  8. Oh, would that we had snow! 😦 I like the simplicity of this. I’ve never done haikus, but reading this and other haikus through Potluck and Rally has started to pique my interest.

  9. Lisa Says:

    Beautiful haiku! I never could write those.

  10. How I miss the winter snow!! Too warm here in Bakersfield…

  11. siubhan Says:

    perfectly lovely. makes me wish it were snowing here….

  12. wonderful haiku. nice job!

  13. I enjoyed this and the timing is perfect as we’re expecting our first snow tonight.

    My rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/jingles-poetry-rally-thanksgiving/

  14. what a marvellous expression for first snow 🙂 loved it.

    My Entry For The Poet’s Rally Is Here

  15. tasithoughts Says:

    I feel the nip on my nose. Beautiful haiku for the season.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thankfulness/

  16. Seasweetie Says:

    Lovely haiku. I’d thought of trying one this week – it’s been years since I have. Thanks for the inspiration.

    http://seasweetie.wordpress.com/2010/11/19/bonus-poem-for-this-week/

  17. ~Drew Says:

    I need a jacket! Love it

  18. Sumit Sarkar Says:

    Fantastic haiku 🙂

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