Shawn L. Bird

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poem-blurred May 3, 2021

Filed under: poem,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:37 am
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Today

life is soft focus

foggy view.

Slow brain.

Whole body blurred,

translucent.

If someone took a photo

would I be a phantom?

 

4 Responses to “poem-blurred”

  1. trE Says:
    May 3, 2021 at 11:21 am

    Short and poignant and ends perfectly, Shawn.

    Reply
  3. Debra Says:
    May 4, 2021 at 7:43 pm

    I like this very much, Shawn. I’ve felt like this, and didn’t have the words. Perfect!

    Reply
  4. Susi Bocks Says:
    May 27, 2021 at 3:42 pm

    Oh, I’ve felt that many times!

    Reply

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