Inspiration:
green mountain sides
blue skies
spruce scented air
Danger:
summer lightning
immolation
devastating beauty
Prescription:
diamonds dancing
mountain lake
water-bomber
Metaphor:
change
desire
this
Inspiration:
green mountain sides
blue skies
spruce scented air
Danger:
summer lightning
immolation
devastating beauty
Prescription:
diamonds dancing
mountain lake
water-bomber
Metaphor:
change
desire
this
Shawn Bird is an author, poet, and educator in the beautiful Shuswap region of British Columbia, Canada. She is a proud member of Rotary.
Good poem. Though, is “precription” a typo? Was wondering if it should say “prescription”… or maybe “prediction”? 🙂
I can tell the metaphors, here. They are very simple, in expression. Everything here reflects itself like something dying to become a new day, or a reincarnation. As though, from the beginning to the end, there are continuous warning signs to what is bound to change, and never stay still.
Though, that’s only one perception of this work. 🙂
I like it!
Good catch! I will fix that typo! 🙂
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