Shawn L. Bird

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poem-fuel August 29, 2020

Filed under: poem,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 3:59 pm
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Inspiration:

green mountain sides
blue skies
spruce scented air

Danger:

summer lightning
immolation
devastating beauty

Prescription:

diamonds dancing
mountain lake
water-bomber

Metaphor:

change
desire
this

 

2 Responses to “poem-fuel”

  1. Good poem. Though, is “precription” a typo? Was wondering if it should say “prescription”… or maybe “prediction”? 🙂

    I can tell the metaphors, here. They are very simple, in expression. Everything here reflects itself like something dying to become a new day, or a reincarnation. As though, from the beginning to the end, there are continuous warning signs to what is bound to change, and never stay still.

    Though, that’s only one perception of this work. 🙂

    I like it!


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