Shawn L. Bird

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poem- acid December 7, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:30 am
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Boy hiking out of bounds slips into acidic hot pool at Yellowstone


Huge flock of snow geese land in an old, acidic open pit mine

well over ten thousand birds


She lands into a relationship, ripe with promise, is tripped

by his acidic wit, and a bit of her


One never knows when the innocuous will turn





Man Dissolved in Acidic Water After Trying to Soak in Yellowstone National Park Hot Pool



4 Responses to “poem- acid”

  1. I cannot resist saying that this has a good bite, although I almost NEVER make puns! It does however, beautifully convey the sting of disappointment and disillusionment in love.

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