poem-see | Shawn L. Bird

poem-see June 12, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:28 am
Tags: assonance, communication, metaphor, oxymoron, personification, poem, poetry, relationships

See the twisting silence

weaving between them;

pursed lips, downcast eyes,

See their knot tighten

further together, closer apart.

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8 Responses to “poem-see”

righteousbruin9 Says:
June 12, 2016 at 4:42 pm
See the denial. See the unraveling.

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  June 12, 2016 at 6:26 pm
  😉
  
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DeniseBalog Says:
June 12, 2016 at 5:16 pm
So visual!! Excellent!

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- Shawn L. Bird Says:
  June 12, 2016 at 6:26 pm
  Thank you, Denise.
  
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  - DeniseBalog Says:
    June 12, 2016 at 6:42 pm
    Sad to say Shawn, I could see split couples on parent/Teacher night. Oh how the children suffer the separate looks on whose fault it is little Johnny is struggling in school:(
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    June 12, 2016 at 7:05 pm
    Generally, in my experience, it’s Little Johnny’s fault for not doing his work in class…
  - DeniseBalog Says:
    June 12, 2016 at 7:07 pm
    Yep, but you know, gotta blame someone!! Lol
  - Shawn L. Bird Says:
    June 12, 2016 at 7:28 pm
    Yeah. The teacher is usually the preferred target, however.

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