Shawn L. Bird

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poem-hollow March 24, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:58 am
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There are so many hollow places

that feel the lack of you.

I want you like water,

fill me up,

make me a waterfall,

creating hollow places in my travels.


8 Responses to “poem-hollow”

  1. manishabnrj Says:

    love it,,love it, 🙂

  2. Love, I want you like water quinch my thirst, fill me up, let my cup overflow, make me a waterfall, a beautiful blue, flowing softly , creating a hollow path in my travel…

  3. it’s beautiful. You’re amazing, a wordsmith expressing inexpressibles.

  4. He is a very lucky river!

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