Shawn L. Bird

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poem-hollow March 24, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:58 am
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There are so many hollow places

that feel the lack of you.

I want you like water,

fill me up,

make me a waterfall,

creating hollow places in my travels.

 

8 Responses to “poem-hollow”

  1. manishabnrj Says:
    March 24, 2016 at 10:03 am

    love it,,love it, 🙂

    Reply
  2. poetrytributescom Says:
    March 24, 2016 at 10:22 am

    Love, I want you like water quinch my thirst, fill me up, let my cup overflow, make me a waterfall, a beautiful blue, flowing softly , creating a hollow path in my travel…

    Reply
  3. nombre de la pluma Says:
    March 24, 2016 at 1:08 pm

    it’s beautiful. You’re amazing, a wordsmith expressing inexpressibles.

    Reply
  4. righteousbruin9 Says:
    March 24, 2016 at 10:36 pm

    He is a very lucky river!

    Reply

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