Shawn L. Bird

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poem-visiting February 8, 2016

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:37 am
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Dad came for a visit

and we discussed laundry soap

in my dream.

He didn’t ask about Mom,

and I didn’t tell him.


10 Responses to “poem-visiting”

  1. seanbidd Says:

    Natural wonders from a dream filled mind.

  2. Amazing, how specific our encounters with our departed loves are.

  3. tskraghu Says:

    Susceptibe to many interpretations! Nice, thanks.

  4. Anthonyinuk Says:

    A huge sense of backstory in five lines. I like it – I have browsed your poems and you convey a sense of something deliberately unsaid, hanging in the air or between the lines. Thank you for following my blog, I look forward to searching through yours.

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