Shawn L. Bird

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poem-sculpting August 10, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:45 am
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I’m sculpting an image of you

molding and twisting clay into your likeness.

You emerge from mud as a miniature relief

and I sigh that I remember your face at all.

I’m sculpting you, creating who I wish you were

You emerge determined to be yourself,

no matter my intentions.

In the end, clay is inadequate for both of us.

 

10 Responses to “poem-sculpting”

  1. CloudFairy61's avatar TrewwGriTT61 Says:

    Reblogged this on sandylweston and commented:
    This poem explains why “only GOD can make a tree!” And only God has the right clay for people-shaping! LOVE the poem!

  2. Reblogged this on interalleyah and commented:
    Still adjusting to the poignance and harsh reality this one carries, ever so lightly.

  3. jburns58's avatar jburns58 Says:

    One’s self is one’s self, you can change the outside but the heart remains the same!

  4. No matter how hard one tries, one cannot mold another.

  5. Oliana's avatar Oliana Says:

    Lovely. Conjures lots if thoughts. Mostly reminds me hue I cannot draw or sculpt but writing can often create a pretty good image:)


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