Shawn L. Bird

15 Responses to “haiku-gratification”

1. Karin Says:

   July 15, 2015 at 10:38 am

   Oh snap! 😉
   Great haiku Shawn!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 15, 2015 at 12:55 pm

     😉

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2. Melody J Haislip Says:

   July 15, 2015 at 12:06 pm

   This may be my most favorite of all your poems. It contained a whole universe of meaning. 🙂

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 15, 2015 at 12:55 pm

     lol
     Thanks Melody.

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3. seanarthurjoyce Says:

   July 15, 2015 at 12:31 pm

   “Stares,” not “stairs.” Haiku is great writing discipline.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 15, 2015 at 12:56 pm

     I was going to fix that, but then I thought perhaps she is climbing somewhere (or hopes to)

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4. righteousbruin9 Says:

   July 15, 2015 at 12:37 pm

   Mutual it is; otherwise, satisfaction isn’t.

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 15, 2015 at 12:57 pm

     Not necessarily. Making someone else happy can be satisfying, otherwise we wouldn’t give gifts?

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     • righteousbruin9 Says:

       July 15, 2015 at 2:52 pm

       I was thinking of the more specific matter, but, you’re right- I have always felt better giving than receiving.
     • Shawn L. Bird Says:

       July 15, 2015 at 3:05 pm

       lol
       That reminds me of a Friends episode…
5. jburns58 Says:

   July 15, 2015 at 3:56 pm

   Shawn , that statement could mean a lot of things. Whatever it is, has to be pleasant

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 15, 2015 at 4:00 pm

     😉

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     • jburns58 Says:

       July 15, 2015 at 4:23 pm

       Thank you.
6. Pollie Math Says:

   July 16, 2015 at 10:40 pm

   Five stars from me!

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   • Shawn L. Bird Says:

     July 16, 2015 at 11:49 pm

     Thanks, Pollie

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