Shawn L. Bird

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poem- falling October 4, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:35 am
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So many questions

falling like leaves

that I can not ask.

 

12 Responses to “poem- falling”

  1. Prior...'s avatar prior Says:

    nice – and not sure if it matters – but cannot is one word…

  2. chris jensen's avatar jensenempire2551 Says:

    Why not ask a leaf?

  3. Maureen Sudlow's avatar kiwiskan Says:

    but I kept thinking I’d want to swap the second and third lines around…

  4. spicejac's avatar spicejac Says:

    Reblogged this on Living Small in a Big World and commented:
    It’s been a long time since I put some poetry out there – so here’s Shawn L. Bird and the Poem – Falling for you to read and reflect upon. Enjoy!

  5. This is me. There are so many things I want to say but I’m so scared.


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