Shawn L. Bird

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poem- crush September 30, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:47 pm
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Crush

Crush on you

Rocks crushed

Emotionally crushed.

Orange Crush

Crush

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Just playing with a word.

 

 

10 Responses to “poem- crush”

  1. When I was a kid I used to Love Orange Crush soda, however my soda drinking days are over. Too much acid and caffeine. Anyway I Love the way you play with words. Very creative. Experimentation is a good thing.

  2. nearlywes's avatar nearlywes Says:

    The word crush always reminds me of the song Crush by The Dave Matthews Band. If you haven’t heard the song do your ears a favor and listen to it, it’s amazing.

  3. Be Enough's avatar beenough Says:

    You ‘crushed’ it as usual!

  4. Prior...'s avatar prior Says:

    wow – I think you captured exactly what my son went through this summer with a girl he met – hung out with – dated – broke up, etc. ha!

  5. Em's avatar Em Says:

    Very cool. Fun to read this. Loved your comment on my blog as well. Very good point.


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