Shawn L. Bird

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poem-whisper June 30, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 1:44 am
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“One more thing,”

she whispers

and turns him

inside out.

 

33 Responses to “poem-whisper”

  1. Now this is sexy πŸ™‚

  2. kevin8084's avatar kevin8084 Says:

    I think that she turns him inside-out in a good way πŸ™‚

  3. garymilstead's avatar garymilstead Says:

    Oo. Is being turned inside out a good or bad thing? Subjective, I suppose.

  4. Jim Stewart's avatar narble Says:

    I’m all for it!

  5. atexasmist's avatar atexasmist Says:

    Oh! Love it!

  6. Sherry Bibb's avatar Sherry Bibb Says:

    I guess it depends on which kind of couple comes to your imagination. Your tag includes romance, someone else may have thought grocery list – but then, that usually isn’t whispered. This made me smile, thanks.

  7. So much said in so few words – LOVE IT!

  8. loydbrown's avatar loydbrown Says:

    Being turned inside out can be a wondrous thing. You are open and love can fill you up.

  9. awain69's avatar Diane Says:

    Shawn, I really do enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing it. You add so much beauty to the world.
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  10. Is it just me or is your poetry maturing a good bit of late? Great stuff.

  11. lula avila's avatar lula avila Says:

    Good! You have a story there.

  12. dianelunasea's avatar dianelunasea Says:

    Lovely poem, spur to the imagination … thanks for following my blog! kind regards,Diane

  13. isoney's avatar isoney Says:

    It’s like a camera panning away before the watershed! Which is sometimes the way that passion is best expressed in words.Beautiful. Loved it.


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