Shawn L. Bird

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poem- deep June 11, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:13 pm
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This isn’t silence

This is you

thinking

cogs whirring

thoughts stirring

trolling the bottom

of the ocean

for the solution

to your dilemma,

resolving the conflict

with yourself.

 

19 Responses to “poem- deep”

  1. colonialist's avatar colonialist Says:

    That is a conflict with little chance of a winner.

  2. words4jp's avatar words4jp Says:

    I gots a lot if deep going on. I would really like a break – how about a shallow? A poem – shallow?

  3. jetgirlcos's avatar jetgirlcos Says:

    It’s perfect. I love it. Thanks for sharing πŸ™‚

  4. I’ve seen this too!

  5. Shawn,

    “Deep” is just that! I like the ideas and thoughts created by your words. I can’t help but think that life is a constant cycle of searching and finding resolutions within ourselves. The water metaphor fabulous! Thank you for sharing.

    Take care,
    Pepper

  6. jlcraig280's avatar jlcraig280 Says:

    Hmmmm. Nice self-reflecting approach.

  7. racheltoalson's avatar racheltoalson Says:

    This reminds me of my husband and me in conflict. Wonderfully expressed!

  8. thoughtful ! plz check on some of my poems too wenever free…wud love your feedback πŸ™‚ ty

  9. Yep, I resemble this one. πŸ˜‰


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