Shawn L. Bird

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poem- if I loved you more May 25, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:24 am
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If I loved you more

it would ooze out of my pores

explode from my brain,

sizzle on my skin.

If I loved you more

you would never leave my side

I would wrap around your limbs

palpate your heart in my hands.

I could not love you more

for I am sloshing with love,

full to bursting,

obsessed,

with you.

 

 

19 Responses to “poem- if I loved you more”

  1. Love this poem! Although I’m not sure if it makes me feel romantic or a bit creeped out, lol.

  2. LondonMistress's avatar LondonMistress Says:

    Love it!

  3. Passion in its fullest form. Beautiful!

  4. Momus Najmi's avatar Momus Najmi Says:

    Reblogged this on The World of Momus and commented:
    Interesting poem on an interesting blog, have a look at her blog

  5. Andy's avatar Andy Says:

    I love this poem. Neediness in the raw; the grasping, clasping, needy love of raging child locked away in the basement!

  6. toad2015's avatar toad2015 Says:

    Very lucky man!

  7. I love the imagery. Fascinating! 😉

  8. jeremymayo's avatar jeremymayo Says:

    Great word pictures. You always have a way of fueling the wildest imagination.


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