What you wanted to be
Everything you wanted to see
Was it you who lied?
Or was it me?
What dreams did you hide
in the tears you cried?
Was it you who lied?
Or was it me?
When your mother sighed
When your father denied
When you tried to foresee
Was it you who lied?
or was it me?
Were we lacking in pride?
Why could you not confide?
We simply could not see
so was it you who lied?
or was it me?
Nice……..and beautiful!
Thanks.
I really enjoy your writing! Thanks again!
My pleasure.
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No darling it i who lied…
Love this!
I appreciate the encouragement
Poignant!
Thanks
Love it! First I read it as a child and then I read it as a parent. Brought a tear to my eye.
Excellent idea, to explore perspective that way! I like it. Thanks for sharing that!